[TOEFL] ν ν λΌμ΄ν 2λ² λ¬Έμ λ΅λ³ ν νλ¦Ώ (TOEFL Writing Q2. Academic Discussion Template)
Ideation
convenient
accesible
easy to use
save money
save time
mental and physical health
danger
a better work and life balance
good memories
education
Template
(1) My inclination is toward [νμμ΄λ¦].
(2) She/He pointed out that [μ νν νμ μ견 μμ½]
(3) However, she/he didn't mention another important effect/reason/method/factor/benefit of this [ν ν½].
(4) In my opinion, the biggest benefit of [ν ν½] is that it can...
the biggest effect
the biggest reason
the most effective method
the biggest factor
the biggest benefit
(5) This is because...
(6) For example, [λ΄ μ¬λ‘λ κ°μ‘±/μ§μΈ/μΉκ΅¬ μ¬λ‘ μ§μ΄λ΄μ μ°κΈ°]
λ³΄ν΅ μλλ λΆμ μ μΈ μν©μ΄μλλ° [ν ν½] λλΆμ κΈμ μ μΌλ‘ μ νλμλ€λ λ΄μ©
(7) Therefore, [ν ν½] should be positivley considered.
positively considered.
seriously considered.
given high priority.
Practice
(1) My inclination is toward Justin.
(2) He pointed out that targeted advertising can save money.
*νμμ΄ μΈκΈν ν ν½ κ·Έλλ‘ μ°κΈ°
(3) However, he didn't mention another important effect of this marketing strategy.
*This ~~λ‘ ν¨λ¬νλ μ΄μ§
(4) In my opinion, the biggest benefit of advertisements to consumers with cetain traits or interests is that it can save their shopping time.
*κ΅μκ° μΈκΈν ν ν½
(5) This is because it is easier for consumers to find services or products they want.
(6) For example, my sister used to look for baby products such as a baby car seat. She said it was very difficult to find an appropriate product offline that would perfectly fit her car and baby. As an office worker, she didn't have enough time to spend on shopping at that time. However, she unexpectedly found the perfect item through online shopping with targeted advertising.
(7) Therefore, personalized ads should be positively considered.
*ν ν½ λ΄ λ°©μλλ‘ ν¨λ¬νλ μ΄μ§
(1) My inclination is toward Kelly.
(2) She pointed out that future generations may suffer from a polluted environment.
(3) However, she didn't mention another important effect of environmentally friendly policies.
(4) In my opinion, the biggest benefit of protecting the environment is that it can contibute to people's mental and physical health.
(5) This is because we can not only breathe cleaner air but also enjoy a healthier lifestyle through well-preserved nature.
(6) For example, last year, I worked at a company called Samsung. It was very stressful because there were tons of things to do as a new employee. Fortunately, there was a riverside park in front of my office. I was able to relieve the stress that I got from my work while feeling the gentle breeze in nature. Looking back, my co-workers also maintained their healthy daily routine by taking walks in the riverside park as well.
(7) Therefore, environmental protections should be seriously considered.
(1) My inclination is toward Lucy.
(2) She pointed out that students should choose their major based on their academic skills because that way enables them to understand the lectures and handle the workload.
(3) However, she didn't mention another important factor in choosing field of study.
(4) In my opinion, the biggest factor when choosing a major in college is innate talent.
(5) This is because it is natural to find enjoyment in your major if you have innate talent.
(6) For example, when I was a high school student, I had a friend named Amy. Her parents wanted her to choose an engineering major, however, she chose an art school with a strong conviction in her artistic talent. Because she was naturally gifted in artistic sense and spotting trends, her painting skills dramatically improved during her university years. Over time, she became a famous artist, and her parents were proud of her as well.
(7) Therefore, each person's talent should be seriously considered when choosing a major.
(1) My inclination is toward Katie.
(2) She pointed out that space programs can contribute to combating poverty by creating jobs.
(3) However, she didn't mention another important effect of spending money on space exploration.
(4) In my opinion, the biggest benefit of space exploration is that it can be a long-term strategy for eradicating poverty.
(5) This is because space programs can lead to not only technological advancement, but also economic growth.
(6) For example, akin to space exploration, many countries have invested in internet and network technology for a few decades. As a result, the internet became a bridge that closes the economic gap by providing education or creating job opportunities. Similarly, space research has a high potential to boost the global economy.
(7) Therefore, exploring the cosmos should be given higher priority.
(1) My inclination is toward Grace.
(2) She pointed out that freelance jobs such as tutors or editors can generate a high income.
(3) However, she didn't mention another important benefit of being a freelancer.
(4) In my opinion, the biggest benefit of starting my own business is that I can have a better work and life balance.
(5) This is because those who work alone are able to manage their own schedule and workload.
(6) For example, my father was employed at a company for over 10 years. When I was a child, I felt very sad and unhappy because I couldn't spend much time playing with my father. At that time, he worked even on weekend being pressured by his boss's order. However, his online side job grew larger than his main job, enabling him to quit his company and focus on his online business. Since then, my family has been happier than before because he can control his own work schedule, and even travel with us as a family.
(7) Therefore, working for myself should be given high priority in choosing the path after graduation.
(1) My inclination is toward Dylan.
(2) He pointed out that smartphones help us stay in touch with precious people living far away.
(3) However, he didn't mention another important benefit of this prevalent technology.
(4) In my opinion, the biggest benefit of smartphones is that I can save time by using them.
(5) This is because we can have conversations anytime, anywhere with smartphones.
(6) For example, when I worked at a company last year, there were tons of things to do. I was so busy that I couldn't set an offline meeting schedule with my co-worker. So I sent a message to him and immediately shifted my focus back to my work. After a while, the colleague replied to me in his free time. We were able to quickly launch a video call from different cities and cover an urgent agenda. Looking back, the smartphone led to high work efficiency for me.
(7) Therefore, smartphone should be positively considered.